大家好
我是来自xx班的。性格活泼开朗，处事沉着、果断，能够顾全大局。今天我很荣幸地站在这里表达自己由来已久的愿望：“我要加入学会会纪检部。”我在这里郑重承诺：“我将尽全力完成学校领导和同学们交给我的任务，使学生会成为一个现代化的积极团体，成为学校的得力助手和同学们信赖的组织。”
在这段时间里，我学会了怎样为人处世、怎样学会忍耐，怎样解决一些矛盾，怎样协调好各成员之间的关系，怎样处理好其它部门之间的关系，怎样动员一切可以团结的力量，怎样提拔和运用良才，怎样处理好学习与工作之间的矛盾。这一切证明：我有能力有资格加入学生会纪检部并且有能力把学生会发扬光大。
请各位大家给我一张信任的投票，给我一个施展才能的机会!
Apt. 1, Wuyi Road Changsha, Hunan, P.R. China 410007
WORK EXPERIENCE
19xx.3-present Materials Engineer
Hunan Human Resource, Changsha, China.
Direct and conduct studies on forming and thermal treatment of mentals. Al-based alloys and metallic materials and on the properties and characterization of materials.
Co-ordinate production testing and control of metal refining and foundry operations.
Inspecting and testing the quality of materials products for exporting & importing.
Supervise technical staff and manage materials-related projects/contracts.
19xx.8-.11 Metallurgical Engineer
Changsha Machine Tools Foundry Plant, Changsha, China
Co-ordingate production testing and control of metal smelting, molding, forming.
Heat treatment processing of dual-metal band saw imported from Germany. Materials selection and test, welding.
EDUCATION
19xx.8-19xx.8 National University of Science & Defense Technology, Changsha, China. B. Eng. in Metallurgical Engineering.
Thank you for taking your time. It’s really my honor to have this opportunity to take part in this interview. Now， I would like to introduce myself briefly.
My name is Doris. I am 23 years old and born in Qingdao. I graduated from Hebei University of Science and Technology. My major is English. And I got my bachelor degree after my graduation. I also studied Audit in Hebei Normal University of Science and Technology. I am very interested in English and study very hard on this subject. I had passed TEM-8 and BEC Vantage. I worked in an American company at the beginning of this year. My spoken English was improved a lot by communicating with Americans frequently during that period.
I am very optimistic and easy to get along with. I have many friends. Teamwork spirit is very important in this age. I think if we want to make big achievement， it’s very important to learn how to cooperate with other people. My motto is "characters determine destity"， so I alwarys remind myself to be honest and modest to everyone .
A verd says "attitude is everything". If I get this job， I will put all my heart in it and try my best to do it well
我是一名应届师范毕业生，在校是一名优秀学生，我是一个乐观向上拥有梦想的青年，性格活泼开朗，稳重成熟的外表下，充溢着内心的细心踏实，在大学四年不断成熟和锻炼的基础上，我更加独立;活泼乐观的性情也促使我积极地参加各种有意义的活动，吸收每个值得个人成长的优点而去弥补不足;读书和闲暇时，却养成了好的行为习惯，旨在处处提高自己的素质。
既然是学校，就必定要有学生的样子，对我的专业从来都是认真对待，熟练掌握专业知识，所以备写教案从不马虎，上台演讲，会议上发表言论频繁有条理，这已经成为一种习惯。但也会有多处不擅长的地方，遭到难题，也养成了多问多想多查阅的习惯，也因此培养了更广泛的亲和力，耐心和合作能力等。针对导师分配的任务，也大多采取小组合作，所以需要个人和其他组员达成意见一致，并需要认真完成每个人应完成的作业，结果个人和组的评比成绩才会优秀，这更是一个锻炼的机会，把握每个机会为工作及其其他个人发展的星点奠定基础都很有必要。
我是一个虚心接受前辈指导，接受上级批评的人，有错会改更是难得的品质。利用业余时间兼职期间，让我懂得了人要勤奋，要上进，有耐心，懂得从小做起，做好每项工作，个人的专业知识及拓展知识要丰富，这样做起事来才会得心应手。
我是一个兴趣广泛的青年，喜欢舞蹈，听音乐，看书，运动，手工制作，画画等。虽然我对其中的每一个技巧不精湛，但可以从多面的塑造自己，更加乐观，做事情会翛然而来，翛然而往，不忘其所始，不求其所终，微笑接纳世界!曾在大学每一学年的艺术选课上，选择艺术体操，健身舞蹈，儿童舞蹈恰恰等，成绩良好;体质健康排在第一位，每年的体能测试都会以优秀结束，而且一周恰好抽出两三天时间锻炼身体，如慢跑，羽毛球等，这不是无用的，世界是很小的，我也结识了一些志同道合的朋友，逐渐在一定的场合也健谈了起来，也耳闻了曾经不知道的事情，所以无论是做事情还是懂得，我相信可以从新的幼稚的一方面做起，逐渐地做事情会变得得心应手。
希望贵方耐心看完自我评价，对我有更深的了解，也弥补实践一栏中多处所做的事情没有写完整，谢谢!
The reason why I want to go Singapore is I like to learn some different culture and I can meet a lot people from all around the world, that way I can make more friends. I like the weather in Singapore also. I will go back to china, the reason is very simple, because I am a Chinese I will never forgot my country. Be honestly, I will pick Tsinghua University, because to go to Tsinghua University is one of the biggest dreams in my life and Tsinghua University is the best University in my country.
If I like literature, I probably will like comedies more, beacuse I am an optimism and I want to make reader happy when they ready my essay. I want to be success in every single class in the university, when I graduate me want to be a business administration.
I like to read the novel in my spare time.
My goal is to graduate as soon as possible, and find a good job, a husband and make allot money. I do have idol in my mind, she is my mother, she is very great woman and she will do every thing for me.
I think high school entrance examination is very easy, but I know I still have allot think should learn.
我叫，x年x月xx日在x市出生。于x年x月毕业于x学院，主要学习专业.我出生在一个充满着温馨和谐的气氛的家庭里。父亲是忠厚善良的工人，从小就严格教导我怎样去做人，培养我做一个遇事坚强，做事有毅力，对什么事情都要充满责任感的人。母亲出自教师家庭，潜移默化的培养了我的严谨性格和对知识的渴望。在这种教育环境下，我慢慢的长大成人了。从小学起就成绩突出的我，性格开朗，喜欢交朋友，有了朋友的陪伴我度过了丰富精彩的童年时光。
步入初中之后，父母对我的学业更加严格要求。由于成绩突出曾担任学习委员班长之职。x年xx月考入高级中学，在掌握知识的同时，从小就热爱体育运动的我喜欢上篮球运动，多次代表校方参加比赛荣获奖项。同时我还喜欢多种体育运动，并且喜欢国外音乐。就在这时我喜欢上了韩国歌曲。自此接触了少量的韩国语言。精通英语的同时让我掌握了一点点的韩国语!度过高中充实的3年后，x年x月我以高出录取线百分的成绩考入x学院继续x年专业的学习。学习期间品学突出，荣幸被老师推荐学生会工作。结交了更多的朋友，扩充了交际领域，增加了我对生活的认识。更加珍惜我的大学生活!
通过对专业知识的学习，我了解到中韩自1992年建交以来，两国的各方面交流就以飞快的速度增长。近几年来韩国与中国之间的经济和文化交流空前壮大。自此我萌生赴韩留学深造的想法。韩国是亚洲经济强国，社会安定、人民友善的发达国家，国际贸易往来频繁。是我学习国际贸易知识与经验的最佳地点;其次，贵国大学一流的师资和教学也是我学习进修的理想校园。并且贵国语言，礼节，建筑，服饰，饮食，娱乐等各方面文化是一直深深吸引着我想去接触了解的国度。
由于语言并不精通，我打算在韩国首先学习语言，争取在最短时间内熟练掌握运用，尽早融入韩国社会，再继续我所选专业课的学习。因为对韩国语言有一定的基础和对其有一定了解，所以会很快完成这一转换过程。此期间在韩国学习以及各项其他费用均由我家人提供。他们都有稳定的工作和收入。尤其对我赴韩留学非常支持。在学习期间我会努力充实自己，利用一切时间提高自己的知识高度，学习先进的理念。
在结束所有的课程后，条件准许的话我会继续深造读研，或是返回中国。(回国理由：把我所学的专业知识发挥出来并应用到实践工作中。目前的中国，已经加入世界贸易组织，经济蓬勃发展，正吸引着国际复合型人才的目光，相信未来的中国，会有更大的发展空间和更多的机遇。所以我要努力提高自己的水平，体现我最大的价值)。
私は科学の学院英語学科 の学生です。名前は袁でございます。あたしの
趣味は本を読むし、旅行するし、スポーツなどです。今度ここで自己绍介するのが栄耀です。あたし梦がいっぱいあります、作家や画家になりたいんです、今の大切な愿いは勉强しつつあるん。
だからこそ、今度は成功にしろ失败にしろ、私は最高の努力をしました! 自分を信じて、成功します!
Good morning, my name Cindy, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview, i would like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this prestigious university in september. now i will introduce myself briefly,I am 23 years old,born in province ,and i am curruently a senior student at beijing major I will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in the past 4 years,i spend most of my time on study,i have passed CET6 with a ease. and i have acquired basic knowledge of packaging and publishing both in theory and in practice. besides, i have attend
several packaging exhibition hold in Beijing, this is our advantage study here, I have taken a tour to some big factory and company. through these I have a deeply understanding of domestic packaging industry. compared to developed countries such as us, unfortunately, although we have made extraordinary progress since 1978,our packaging industry are still underdeveloped, mess, unstable, the situation of employees in this field are awkard. but I have full confidence in a bright future if only our economy can keep the growth pace still.
I guess you maybe interested in the reason itch to law, and what is my plan during graduate study life,I would like to tell you that pursue law is one of my lifelong goal,I like my major packaging and I wont give up,if I can pursue my master degree here I will combine law with my former education.
I will work hard in thesefields ,patent ,trademark, copyright, on the base of my years study in department of p&p, my character? i cannot describe it well, but i know I am optimistic and confident. sometimes i prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but I am not lonely, i like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,my favorite pastime is valleyball,playing cards or surf online. through college life,I learn how to balance between study and entertainment. by the way, I was a actor of our amazing drama club. i had a few glorious memory on stage. that is my pride.
Personal statement:
Good morning teachers! My name is . I’m in Class Eleven, Grade Three from Dalian No. Senior High School in Liaoning Province. It is my great honor to be here for this presentation. To be admitted to the University of Hong Kong, I have always experienced trials and hardships with no regret for many years.
It is really a good memory for me to visit Hong Kong when I was still a primary school student, because Hong Kong has its own excellent geographical location. It has a perfect financial system, information network and mature legal system. The University of Hong Kong is succeeding in front among the famous universities in the world.
I'm eager for going to the University of Hong Kong, and I make a good achievement in Grade One and Grade Two-“get the first and the second”, moreover, I also make a good mark in Grade Three. I’ve got ten top students in every grade for many times, and I won the first prize in the national innovation in the English competition in 20xx.
I take an active park in the school club activities, the vice minister of Astronomy department. I also participated in social practice, and joined the Dalian charity federation volunteer branch and actively participate in volunteer activities. “To study for learning” that I have always thought, but most important thing is I love English, that is my interest. It is I was obsessed with the language that I make the firm confidence to go to the University of Hong Kong. I hope that 4-year professional study in Hong Kong can make me know more about foreign language deeply, improve my translation level, and after graduation, I want to become a qualified translator and I hope I can do what I can do a drive that the angel of the sino-foreign cultural exchanges, let more foreign friends understand our Chinese great nation and long culture. In the foreign friends’ eyes, I hope that "a dream of red mansions" is no longer only difficult language symbol, the foreign novel in Chinese people’s eyes isn’t also difficult to understand, and this will be my greatest glory in my life!
In the future, I believe that I can definitely become a member of the University of Hong Kong someday with my hard work and effort, the passion and dream. I believe I can do it.
Salute
The national innovation English contest
Nankai university
Beijing university
Dear Sir：
The reason why I want to go Singapore is I like to learn some different culture and I can meet a lot people from all around the world, that way I can make more friends. I like the weather in Singapore also. I will go back to china, the reason is very simple, because I am a Chinese I will never forgot my country. Be honestly, I will pick Tsinghua University, because to go to Tsinghua University is one of the biggest dreams in my life and Tsinghua University is the best University in my country.
If I like literature, I probably will like comedies more, beacuse I am an optimism and I want to make reader happy when they ready my essay. I want to be success in every single class in the university, when I graduate me want to be a business administration.
I like to read the novel in my spare time.
My goal is to graduate as soon as possible, and find a good job, a husband and make allot money. I do have idol in my mind, she is my mother, she is very great woman and she will do every thing for me.
I think high school entrance examination is very easy, but I know I still have allot think should learn.
1、私は前の会社で、仕事をやっていた時、一か月4000元もらいました、今度は前の給料よりもうちょっと頂けばありがたいです、もしよろしければ5000元ほしいんですけれども
2、私は仕事キャリアを持っていません、しかし、貴社に採用された場合は全力を尽くして、仕事に頑張ります、この面、ご安心ください、ちょっとむりなようきゅうかもしれませんが、一かげつ4000げんほしいんですけれども
3、そうですね、この問題はちょっと答えにくいんですけれど，南妨の生活費は北方よりずっと高いですので、試用期間の時は、職種賄で4000元ほしいんです
4、誰でも、お金が好きです、今の私はまだ若いですので、とても高い給料より、貴社で管理などのいろいろな知識を学びたいです、貴社の給料制度を参考して、頂けばいいと思います、試用期あとからは本人のの力と実力によって適当に昇給して下ればありがたいです
Good afternoon .I am of great hornor to stand here and introduce myself to you t of all ,my english name is my chinese name is ..
If you are going to have a job interview ,you must say much things which can show your willness to this job ,such as ,it is my long cherished dream to be I am eager to get an opportunity to then give some examples which can give evidence to you can say something about your hobbies it is best that the hobbies have something to do with the job.
What is more important is do not forget to communicate with the interviewee,keeping a smile and keeping your talks interesting and funny can contribute to the success.
I hope you will give them a wonderful speech luck to you !
私(わたし)はと申(もう)します。日本語学科(がっか)の生徒(せいと)です。私は静(しず)かで穏(おだ)やかな女(おんな)の子(こ)です。趣味(しゅみ)の幅(はば)は広(ひろ)く、书道(しょどう)を爱(あい)し、本(ほん)を読(よ)むのが好(す)きです。私の特长(とくちょう)は歌(うた)うことです。日本语の勉强(べんきょう)を通(とお)して、沢山(たくさん)の友達(ともだち)が出来(でき)ることが嬉(うれ)しいです。そして、先生(せんせい)も本当(ほんとう)に可爱(かわい)いです。日本语(にほんご)の読み書き(よみかき)は问题(もんだい)がありませんが、聴解(ちょうかい)と会话(かいわ)は少し(すこし)苦手(にがて)です。今后(こんご)努力(どりょく)して能力(のうりょく)を高(たか)めるつもりです。
。私は…..がすきです。性格は好奇心が强くいろいろなことを体験(たいけん)してみたいです。将来の梦は社长になる事です。いつかは自分で会社を経営し、社会に贡献できるような仕事をしてみたいと思っています。それは単(たん)に出世(しゅっせ)したいとか、お金をもうけたいと言う事ではなく、自分の能力で人や物や金を動かしたいと言う意味です。それにはまず深く研究して社会人として成长することが必要です。その上で、一人の人间として高い見聞(けんぶん)を持った人物(じんぶつ)にならなくてはなりません。そのためには、日々(ひび)をしっかり勉强しながら、大切に生きていこうと思っている。
顾问名称：王鑫
学历背景：英国莱斯特大学金融经济硕士
顾问简介：
从事留学工作三年多，王鑫老师一直致力于做好学生的后期申请工作，“以细节制胜”是她帮助学生斩获无数美国名校offer的重要法宝。王鑫老师更创新性的提出了“1+2+3”的服务理念，即每周至少给学生提供：1份有价值的参考资料+2封电子邮件+ 3次电话沟通。王鑫老师这一理念获得了学生和家长的一致赞许。
经典案例 ：
姓名：Mavis
毕业院校及专业：北师大 心理学
硬件条件：托福110(口语25) GRE:690+790+3.5 GPA 3.6
申请目标及专业：美国 心理学PHD
申请难点：专业背景稍弱
录取结果：
University of Illinois Urbana Champaign伊利诺伊大学香槟分校
Michigan State University密歇根州立大学
University of Maryland--College Park马里兰大学帕克分校
Mavis是典型的腼腆型的，第一次来公司和我沟通就展现出了这一特点。我接触的学生很多，各种性格的都见过也都接触并且服务过。我觉得性格如同人格，人没有高低贵贱之分，同样的道理，一个性格稍内向的人也不应该遭受到更多的不屑甚至怀疑。因为这都是一个人的特点。
Mavis比较踏实、安静，喜欢做学术研究，在本科期间做了几个项目，和老师一起发了三篇论文，还有一个毕业论文。在沟通方面，Mavis确实有点内向，但是也不会影响沟通。由于她以后即使希望走上学术研究的道路，结合美国的心理学设置情况，帮她最终确定了临床心理学的方向。
在确定了申请方向之后，下面的事情就明朗了许多。在竞争力提升方面，我给她制定了三步走的计划。首先，我建议她参加一些志愿者的活动，多接触社会，锻炼自己的沟通和表达能力。同时，临床心理学也有一些侧重不同人群的分支，让她多接触一些老人和儿童，对她以后申请相关分支也是由帮助的。从能力上来讲，确实能够让她从接触这些人群中体会到心理学的作用。其次，我在帮她选完学校之后就开始安排她和学校的导师套磁。套磁过程也是非常需要技巧和耐心的，一方面要让导师知道你的背景，另一方面又不能太急，要让导师逐渐对你产生兴趣。我们套磁上下了很多的工夫。最后，在Mavis的毕业论文上面我们进行了一些努力。本来她的毕业论文是和她申请的专业没有太多的匹配度，但是我们和她老师进行了协商，变更了论文的题目。在套磁的时候，Mavis就需要看一些导师的论文，这样才能更好的和导师沟通，而这些论文对她完成毕业论文也是有帮助的，是可以作为参考文献的。可以说是一个一举两得的做法。这个论文最后还被评为了优秀毕业论文。
无论是选校、文书、套磁、申请材料，各个部分都应该是一个有机的整体，而文书就是一个纽带，将各个部分结合起来，目标就是申请的学校和专业。在我们的配合之下，Mavis最终申请到了UIUC,密歇根州立，马里兰帕克等名牌大学的录取。
時下ますますだいぶ涼しくなりました貴社の皆様には御健しようのことと拝察申しあげます
私はと申します。今は大学四年生です。来年の7月より成績卒業し学士を取得する見込みです。大学の四年間、私はを専攻して一生懸命に勉強してまいりました。伴に自分自身の発展の将来性と持続性のために私は真面目に日本語やパソコンや英語などを勉強しております。今私の日本語能力水平は級です。それに1年前私は英語CETの試験を受けて免許を取りました。また私は学問に対して情熱を持ち学問と仕事に一生を捧げる事を希望しております。さらに人格的に優れてしております。
ご多忙中、ご配慮をいただき有難うございます。どうぞ宜しくお願い申し上げます。
顾问名称：
学历背景：英国约克大学会计硕士
从业年限：3年
成功案例：200多例
顾问职位：中介事业部美国留学顾问
顾问简介：
潘莹老师出生于沈阳，居家于北京，硕士英国留学。父亲拥有国内能源顶尖企业，母亲从事多年的审计工作，为我学会计专业有一定程度的影响。我热爱管理学，并且取得国家认证的会计、统计、人力资源、市场营销的证书。针对于会计专业，术业有专攻，对于专业度较高的这门专业，她通常以学生姐妹身份亲自指导，关怀备至。她的领导曾经说过，我们的工作不是简单的帮一个孩子申请到一所满意的学校，而是帮助每一个年轻人打造未来，把简单的拿成绩套学校的留学申请，变成以职业规划和性格匹配为目标的个性化院校申请，将每个家庭理想中的蓝图实现，所以这不但是教育事业也是希望事业。
经典案例 ：
学生姓名：秦同学
学生背景：北京对外经贸大学 成绩：GPA3.0 ，托福105 ，GMAT750
申请难点：要求排名靠前的商学院，在会计专业领域中有一定影响，
录取结果：
Indiana University,Bloomington印地安那大学伯明顿分校
New York University纽约大学
The Ohio State University,Columbus俄亥俄州立大学哥伦布分校
University of Washington华盛顿大学
University of California Berkeley加州大学伯克利分校
学生在对外经贸大学学的是会计专业，申请目标为前50大学的。该生的综合素质还是评价有优势，但商学院所要求背景并不是特别突出。在和申请人深度交流和背景挖掘后，我们在文书写作中突出了申请者这方面的背景优势，我们建议在大学中进行会计方面的实习，在我们的帮助下她在一家会计师事务所从事实习会计一岗。
这个女孩子是有些内向的，对于面试方面是比较劣势的。如果我们再按照公司固有常规会计类去做文书写作，无法突出申请人的特色也无法把申请人从众多申请者中抛离出来。
最后去了-印地安那大学伯明顿分校。也算是她本人的一个目标。
i was born in a harmonic and cozy family. my parents both work in a furniture company. the cost of studying and living in korea will be offered by my parents. they both have stable income. they are also in support of my exchange to korea. i really thank them a lot . they taught me how to be a good person when i was young. they help me develop good habits and healthy, optimistic personalities. i had several outstanding achievements since childhood. additionally, with an outgoing personality, i am able to make friends easily. now,i am the minister of research department in college students' union.
as a student in tourism management, i know that communications between china and korea have developed quickly since the two countries established a diplomatic relationship in 1992. especially in recent years, china and korea 's
cultural and economic exchanges are on an unprecedented growth. so i have the idea of being an exchange student to korea. moreover, the first-class faculties and teaching of hanyang university really attract me.
