尊敬的大使馆签证官：
一、我叫……，出生年月，哪里人，现在是哪里的学生(或已获学历、学位、就职单位)
二、说明出国留学的原因，说明为什么选择该国家
三、本人的学习计划
四、最后说明得到了父母的支持，承诺会好好学习，不违背该国家的法律法规。
最后希望得到签证官的批准，感谢用语
属 名及日期
，男，x年7月毕业于旅游管理专业。
我喜欢旅游，大学我选择了旅游管理专业，开始系统学习旅游管理知识，课程涉及国家的旅游文化，当时国家独特的文化内涵给了我很大的感触，我想自己毕业后如果能到国家进一步学习，对开阔视野提升知识面一定会有很大的帮助，但是要去国家，语言是首先要解决的问题，毕业后，我选择到烟台昂立外语学院学习了国家语，经过一段时间的学习，我发现国内学校教的大都为书面化的东西，只有到国家才能领悟到精确的本土文化，我跟父母说了我的想法，父母表示大力支持，并且他们已经为我了足够的留学资金。正好有朋友给我推荐了xx大学，这所大学可以先学习基础语言后学习专业，我觉得挺不错，为了我的梦想，我会在学校努力学习语言，语言合格后，继续留在本校读研，相信本校的专业一定会让我学有所成的。学成回国后，我准备开个主题旅游策划公司，实践自己所学知识。我对所学的这个专业充满激情和动力，当然，我更热爱我的祖国和爸爸妈妈，相信通过我的努力，我会更好的回报祖国的培养和爸妈的养育之恩。
20xx年xx月xx日
i was born in a harmonic and cozy family. my parents both work in a furniture company. the cost of studying and living in korea will be offered by my parents. they both have stable income. they are also in support of my exchange to korea. i really thank them a lot . they taught me how to be a good person when i was young. they help me develop good habits and healthy, optimistic personalities. i had several outstanding achievements since childhood. additionally, with an outgoing personality, i am able to make friends easily. now,i am the minister of research department in college students' union.
as a student in tourism management, i know that communications between china and korea have developed quickly since the two countries established a diplomatic relationship in 1992. especially in recent years, china and korea 's
cultural and economic exchanges are on an unprecedented growth. so i have the idea of being an exchange student to korea. moreover, the first-class faculties and teaching of hanyang university really attract me.
个人陈述(以下简称ps)的写作可以说是申请环节中最具挑战的环节之一。凯思教育招生官指出最出彩的个人陈述是个性化的。
什么是个性化?
"个性化"是说要告诉我你的生活。每个人都有与众不同的地方，而我们之所以成为今天的自己，是生活经验积累的结果。一件事对不同人的意义并不相同，影响你最深的那件事可能并不会对另一个人造成同样的影响。
ps的功能
好的个人陈述不仅仅写了做了什么，更包括如何做和为什么做。也就是说，读者不希望你只是讲一个故事(告诉人们发生了些什么)，你还应当表明这件事是如何改变了你或者你的生活，以及你为什么认为这是一件重要的事。招生官们常常通过个人陈述来判断你是否具有自我意识、是否成熟、是否能够为他们的大学社区做出独特的贡献。 ps的重要性
招生官能通过很多材料来了解你的各方面情况，但他们只有通过个人陈述才能知道你的生活和对你来说意义重大的事物。每所大学都希望它们的新生群体是活生生有个性的学生，而不是一群考试机器。学校希望学生们能够融洽生活、互相帮助、互相激励，并成为成熟的学生社区。
ps要与众不同
要写出个性化的个人陈述，最有挑战的是要与众不同。想要与众不同有很多方法：
1、比如不要去选六个common application写作题目的第一个，因为这个题目选的人最多。其他五个题目都可以考虑，而且第六个题目是自由命题。要敢于选择大胆新颖的主题。
2、 另一个方法是避免大路化的题材，比如怎么在重要比赛的关键时刻得了分赢了比赛、怎样克服了自己害羞腼腆的问题。这些都是很大的成就，但写得人已经太多，不能体现你的独特性了。
认真准备，紧扣题意
想写出好的ps，首先要了解招生官们关注的是什么我推荐大家看哈佛自己出版的《成功
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申请哈佛的个人陈述50篇》，可以体会到过去学生们写作的题材的广度。你也会发现文章的题材并不总是最重要的，有时候你的写作风格比起题材更能加重你被录取的筹码。但记住永远不要写"为什么我有理由在海外留学"。招生官对于你为什么认为自己应该被他们的学校录取不感兴趣。
严格按照题目写作
最后也是最重要的一步，是严格针对你的题目来写。我见过许多写得非常好的文章，但它们都没有严格按照题目来写。写ps之前，一定要反复阅读题目，如果不确定题目想要你表达什么，就去问你的升学指导老师。
个人陈述虽然不容易写，但等你成功完成之后也会获益良多。进入大学之后你的ps题目会成为你和同学之间的一个大话题，而且会在讨论中相互学习。
Family name X, Given name .
I was born in Aug.05,1995. I was graduated from , got bachelor’s degree in Tourism Management in July 20__.
I love travel, In university I chose the tourism management. Began to study the tourism management system . The course covers South Koreas tourism culture. This South Koreas unique cultural connotations touched me very much，I think if I can study further to South Korea after graduation. The course can help me to broaden my outlook and increase my ability. The first thing is that I must to solve the problem of language. I choose to learning 国家 in Angli language school of Yintai after graduation. But, I found the domestic school teach mostly written things, I must go to South Korea grasping the precise local cultures . My Parents is strongly supported For my thoughts. And my parents had good salary to support me for all the cost. A friend recommended South Korea university of white marble to me . I think I could study language first then learn other professional knowledge. After I get the language qualifications, I will continue to stay in this school graduate, I believe I could learn something more in this school.
I will come back to China to open my own theme tourism planning company. I have full of passion to my major. I love my Motherland, love my parents, of course. I must give thanks to my parents for their fostering. I believe we could make good life in the future through my efforts.
Best regards
Dear Sir：
I am . I was born in . I graduate from senior high school and major in English. I started learning English since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking English.
In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to English such as listening to English songs, watching English movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some English clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short- term English study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life English and saw a lot of different things.
I think language is very interesting. I could express one substanceby using different sounds. So I wish I could study and read more English literatures and enlarge my knowledge.
my name is ,and jhonvie is my english name. i was born in
november, ,in rovince, china . now i am studying as an undergraduate in college of university . i take tourism management as my major. here are parts of the courses i have learned during my undergraduate as follows: tourism culture, principles of management, microeconomics,principles of tourism, tourism geography, organization behavior, culture tourism, economic law, accounting principles, principles of statistics, management information system.
我叫，X年X月XX日在X市出生。于X年X月毕业于X学院，主要学习专业.我出生在一个充满着温馨和谐的气氛的家庭里。父亲是忠厚善良的工人，从小就严格教导我怎样去做人，培养我做一个遇事坚强，做事有毅力，对什么事情都要充满责任感的人。母亲出自教师家庭，潜移默化的培养了我的严谨性格和对知识的渴望。在这种教育环境下，我慢慢的长大成人了。从小学起就成绩突出的我，性格开朗，喜欢交朋友，有了朋友的陪伴我度过了丰富精彩的童年时光。
步入初中之后，父母对我的学业更加严格要求。由于成绩突出曾担任学习委员班长之职。X年XX月考入高级中学，在掌握知识的同时，从小就热爱体育运动的我喜欢上篮球运动，多次代表校方参加比赛荣获奖项。同时我还喜欢多种体育运动，并且喜欢国外音乐。就在这时我喜欢上了韩国歌曲。自此接触了少量的韩国语言。精通英语的同时让我掌握了一点点的韩国语!度过高中充实的3年后，X年X月我以高出录取线百分的成绩考入X学院继续X年专业的学习。学习期间品学突出，荣幸被老师推荐学生会工作。结交了更多的朋友，扩充了交际领域，增加了我对生活的认识。更加珍惜我的大学生活! 通过对专业知识的学习，入党申请书范文我了解到中韩自1992年建交以来，两国的各方面交流就以飞快的速度增长。近几年来韩国与中国之间的经济和文化交流空前壮大。自此我萌生赴韩留学深造的想法。韩国是亚洲经济强国，社会安定、人民友善的发达国家，国际贸易往来频繁。是我学习国际贸易知识与经验的最佳地点;其次，贵国大学一流的师资和教学也是我学习进修的理想校园。并且贵国语言，礼节，建筑，服饰，饮食，娱乐等各方面文化是一直深深吸引着我想去接触了解的国度。
由于语言并不精通，我打算在韩国首先学习语言，争取在最短时间内熟练掌握运用，尽早融入韩国社会，再继续我所选
专业课的学习。因为对韩国语言有一定的基础和对其有一定了解，所以会很快完成这一转换过程。此期间在韩国学习以及各项其他费用均由我家人提供。他们都有稳定的工作和收入。尤其对我赴韩留学非常支持。在学习期间我会努力充实自己，利用一切时间提高自己的知识高度，学习先进的理念。
在结束所有的课程后，条件准许的话我会继续深造读研，或是返回中国。(回国理由：把我所学的专业知识发挥出来并应用到实践工作中。目前的中国，已经加入世界贸易组织，经济蓬勃发展，正吸引着国际复合型人才的目光，相信未来的中国，会有更大的发展空间和更多的机遇。所以我要努力提高自己的水平，体现我最大的价值)。
The media's the most powerful entity on earth. An interesting quote from Malcolm X, who also claimed, Without education, you're not going anywhere in this world. I wish to combine these two passions and follow my ambition to become a journalist by continuing my studies into Higher Education. It is well known that power attracts and I, like many others, have become enchanted by the power of the written and spoken word. This fascination has created a deep interest in writing, and Journalism provides the perfect outlet to develop my skills. Ive heard enough about the media industry to realise that experience is everything, and as Sixth Form Reporter on the College committee, I gain regular experience of journalistic writing and meeting deadlines. I have written for the official college Network, which is sent home to parents, and the Student Newspaper. When selecting my A Level subjects, I seemed drawn to essay based courses. I enjoy writing and the courses undoubtedly helped my writing skills. However, I was required to make the opening of a film in Media, which was an experience to say the least! It increased my interest in Broadcast Journalism. Until that moment, I only had eyes for Print. Creative writing has always been one of my favourite aspects of English, and the coursework gave me the chance to write in whichever style I chose, one piece was a newspaper feature on Chelsea Football Club. I have always been interested in Sports Writing and Im considering specialising in it at a later date. I have chosen to continue four of my five AS Levels onto A2, even though it was not necessary. I have always found Psychology quite challenging as it involves deep levels of critical analysis, so I decided to carry on as I find it extremely intriguing. The different theories as to why humans do the things they do, attract me because I am interested in how people act, though one could hardly call me an anthropologist! My main priorities are English, Media and Sociology as I feel they will aid me most in my ambition, although I still find Psychology a fascinating subject. I have often said that nothing is impossible, yet asking me to name my favourite book is asking too much. Some much-loved literature includes The Hobbit, Gone With The Wind, and Jane Eyre. In my opinion a good novel should evoke a variety of emotions from beginning to end. Music may not be my first love, but it is definitely one of my passions; I have high passes in grade 3 flute, singing, and grade 5 piano. Like my literary tastes, my choice of music is eclectic; I like anything from hip-hop to classical, soul to rock, and past to present. I also love Black history, musicals, and icons of film and music, such as Audrey Hepburn, John Lennon, and Sinatra. Lennon once said, We all want to change the world, I empathise with this view and seek to achieve it using my chosen profession and the power of the media.
我的名字叫，女，汉族，1990年09月14日出生在一个幸福的家庭里。年06月毕业于本市重点高中丹东四中。从小妈妈教导我，做事细心、乐于助人、尊敬师长、待人热情的性格。而爸爸教育我，遇到困难要坚强面对，想办法解决，而不是退缩，所以我养成了爱动脑筋的好习惯。正因为我的性格开朗，所以积极参加学校组织的各项活动，深受学校各个老师的喜欢。自上初中开始，我对排球产生了兴趣，参加了学校组织的排球队，由于表现突出，被选为队长职务，在担任队长的这6年里，我带领排球队参加过多次省级、市级的排球比赛，比赛期间获得了国家二级运动员证书，还获得过市级第一名，省级第三名的优异成绩。在初中、高中这6年的排球生涯，使我全方面的得到了锻炼，也感觉到了团队、集体的重要性。
年06月毕业后，我对自己的人生做了一个详细的计划，通过我在排球队的锻炼，我感觉自己对行政方面产生了兴趣，所以我想进一步学习管理方面的知识，因此我有了到韩国继续深造的想法。首先，我要到韩国学习韩国语，然后学习行政学方面的知识。在我的印象中，韩国有着全球领先的教育理念和学习环境，在那里，不仅可以学到书本上的知识，还可以领略到韩国的文化、饮食、服装、艺术等。我虽然是一个运动健将，但是我也是一个爱美的女孩。我要到韩国，学习知识的同时，把自己培养成一个德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的高素质的人才，让美丽与智慧并存。
我的家人知道我想去韩国深造的想法后，也表示非常支持我的选择，家人对韩国也有着非常好的印象，并且妈妈有稳定的收入，可以供我在韩国的一切费用。将来学业完成后，我将带着我的所学回到我的祖国，为祖国的发展贡献自己的一份力量。
最后，由衷的感谢老师能在百忙之中抽出宝贵的时间审阅我的申请材料。希望您能看到一名学生想去韩国留学的诚意，也恳请签证官老师能够帮助我实现梦想！韩国留学生活将是我人生中非常重要的时期，如果我的韩国留学梦能够最终实现的话，我一定会珍惜这来之不易的机会。
I have a few strong passions in life; Indie music, Chelsea FC and literature. Since there are no university courses for the former two my decision concerning what to study at university is a simple one. ' The only people for me are the mad ones, the ones mad to live' was once said by Jack Kerouac in his work On The Road; the opportunity to experience living while studying amongst some of the finest literary minds in the country is overwhelmingly exciting for me. Ifeel that for too long I have been confined to my suburban prison where my talent for English Literature is being wasted amongst the desolate, uninspiring confines of Mid Bedfordshire. Moreover, sidestepping the risk of sounding arrogant, I have been told I possess a flair for the subject and my grades would certainly suggest so. The subjects I took for my AS levels were English Literature, History, Government and Politics and Communication Studies. For my A levels I decided to stop taking Communication Studies as I deemed it was best to focus on three subjects. Nevertheless, I believe that all three of these subjects have contributed more understanding to my knowledge of English Literature. History，for example, has aided my ability to pick out key points within text and also contextualise any written work I may be asked to study. Government and Politics has taught me many political philosophies that are evident in literary works, for example in Year 12 we studied the play Translations which is littered with Nationalist and Imperialist viewpoints. Communications Studies revealed to me a whole new dictionary of ideologies I wasn't previously aware of. Another benefit of taking these subjects is that they are all examined by both coursework and timed exams. This means that through hours of practice and familiarisation I have refined my exam techniques. Last year I was also fortunate enough to be selected to participate in a scheme organized by my school and the University of Bedford. It gave us the opportunity to get a glimpse of university life as I attended a number of lectures and achieved 15 points towards a potential degree through coursework I took part in. This was certainly an enlightening experience that will undoubtedly stand me in very good stead for the initial adjustment period that accompanies the beginning of university life. This year I have been selected to take part in the Advance Extension Award. Not only is this a fantastic boost to my student repertoire but also the course itself should further aid my ability to realize my full potential in the subject. When I achieve the required potential and finish my degree I have ambitions to utilise my skills as writer of some kind, preferably an author or a poet. My literary heroes are Thomas Hardy, John Keats, The Smiths lyricist Morrissey and my personal favourite Oscar Wilde. It is my dream to one day have my name illuminated in history as a writer who has inspired people in the same way these and other writers have inspired me. Lastly, to quote Wilde; 'consistency is the last refuge of the unimaginative'. As a student I am anything but consistent when it comes to the studying of literature. Of course by this I don't mean I can be as equally brilliant as awful, the Dorian Gray within me will tell you I am never awful, what I am articulating is that I bring my own ideas to the subject and do not simply regurgitate answers that are well documented already. That is not to say that I do not thoroughly research and acknowledge the criticism of the works I study but in my opinion English Literature is an innovative subject where interpretation and creativity should dominate. Studying English Literature at university offers me a chance to showcase my love for literature and flourish. The Smiths had a hit song once called Ask and the chorus goes 'ask me, ask me, ask me.' Please do.
。私は…..がすきです。性格は好奇心が强くいろいろなことを体験(たいけん)してみたいです。将来の梦は社长になる事です。いつかは自分で会社を経営し、社会に贡献できるような仕事をしてみたいと思っています。それは単(たん)に出世(しゅっせ)したいとか、お金をもうけたいと言う事ではなく、自分の能力で人や物や金を動かしたいと言う意味です。それにはまず深く研究して社会人として成长することが必要です。その上で、一人の人间として高い見聞(けんぶん)を持った人物(じんぶつ)にならなくてはなりません。そのためには、日々(ひび)をしっかり勉强しながら、大切に生きていこうと思っている。
